President Barack Obama traveled to Australia for two days. Where he declared that the United States will increase their military existences and will expand the role in shaping the Asia Pacific region. Obama announced to enhance the military partnership with close ally with Australia. The United State will deploy up to 250 Marines to australia next year. Then president Obama headed to Bali, and Indonesia to meet the asian work leaders in the region which has become a very important for the United States as it search to improve the trade and create jobs and homes.
I think overall you did very well at summarizing and plotting the main events. Next time just include the dates the events were taking in place of.
President Barack Obama traveled to Australia for two days. Where he declared that the United States will increase their military existences and will expand the role in shaping the Asia Pacific region. Obama announced to enhance the military partnership with close ally with Australia. The United State will deploy up to 250 Marines to australia next year. Then president Obama headed to Bali, and Indonesia to meet the asian work leaders in the region which has become a very important for the United States as it search to improve the trade and create jobs and homes.
I think overall you did very well at summarizing and plotting the main events. Next time just include the dates the events were taking in place of.